TORN
By:
Amber Lehman
A
group of Southern Californian teens learn pivotal lessons about
sexuality, friendship, love and life.
It
was different this time; we weren't acting on a dare. I knew our
motive; we were practicing the act, hoping to impress the right boy
when it came time. But then something happened in the mix of the
moment, in the mix of the alcohol. It wasn't planned, but somehow our
kissing experiment turned into something else. Things went further .
. . and once they had, once I returned to earth from the euphoria . .
. I wrestled with my feelings at that frank realization, questioning
whether our said objective was entirely true.
When
fourteen-year old Krista McKinley transfers from Catholic school in
Ohio to California's public Crestmount High, she discovers she has a
lot to learn. Luckily, she is befriended by Carrie and Brandon and
things start to look up. But when a simple dare tests Krista's
values, it sends her entire world spiraling into a confusing series
of events that leaves her questioning her identity as well as the
people around her.
Excerpt
Sunday
night. I sat perched on the chair behind my desk with only the faint
glow from my reading light. By 10:00 p.m. the night air was crisp as
it floated through my bedroom window. I had been by myself for hours
now.
I
closed my math book and abandoned my homework. I couldn’t
concentrate; wandering thoughts continued to distract me. I bit my
lip and thought about my options. I wanted to talk. I needed to talk,
and Brandon was the only person in whom I could confide. It was late,
but I picked up the phone and dialed, praying he would answer.
After
the third ring, Brandon said, “Hello?”
“It’s
Krista.”
“Hey,
gorgeous.” He sounded remarkably awake.
“I
can’t sleep.”
“Daydreaming
about Daemon?”
“Try
bored. Josh is on a date and basically told us not to expect him
home. Marc had an emergency call from the hospital. Just thought I’d
see if you wanted to come over—hang out.”
After
a moment he said, “Sure.”
“You’re
the best, Brandon.”
“That’s
what they all say.”
I
couldn’t help smiling. “See you when you get here.”
I hung
up the phone, then sat back on my bed and began thinking. I was
scared to be alone in the house at night, but I had other things on
my mind, too. Tonight would be the perfect opportunity to talk to
Brandon. I had a daring question for him—that is, if I got up the
courage to ask him. I’d been tossing around an unlikely idea in my
head ever since he had surprised me with his boyishly sweet kiss.
Just as Carrie and I practiced I began to wonder how things might be
if I were doing the same thing with a boy.
Was it
horrible of me to consider it? Was it something I had no business
asking? Would he hate me or be offended if I did? I was afraid. I
couldn’t be sure how he would react. Well, there was only one way
to find out.
Twenty
minutes later, Brandon rang my doorbell.
“Coming,”
I yelled, sliding down the tile of the foyer in my stocking feet to
come to a skidding halt at the door. I flung it wide open.
“Hey,
you,” he said through a brilliant smile. He wore well-fitted blue
jeans and a silky, short-sleeved, button down shirt in a deep shade
of blue. He looked beautiful in blue. He came inside and closed the
door behind him. We hugged in greeting, and I inhaled a sweet hint of
his cologne.
“Thanks
for coming.”
“No
problem.”
“You
can pick the movie,” I said as we walked into the living room.
“Over by the cabinet.” Brandon headed toward the entertainment
center while I went into the kitchen.
I
returned with two cans of Coke, then flopped down Indian-style on the
couch. “Did you find one?” I said.
Smiling,
he handed me Can’t Buy Me Love.
“Again?
We’ve only seen it a hundred times.”
“But
Patrick Dempsey’s irresistible in this role.” He gave me one of
his ridiculous grins.
“Fine.
But I’ve never understood your taste in men.”
Brandon
put the movie in, then sat down beside me. I tossed him a bag of
Skittles. The usual hard-fast rules about not talking didn’t apply
to this movie, since we knew it by heart. Sometimes it seemed as if
we played it solely for background atmosphere. I made myself
comfortable as the opening credits began to roll.
“How’s
Carrie?” he asked.
Carrie
hadn’t been at school for the past two days. In fact, her school
attendance over the past month had been erratic. I really had no
answer. When I had called Carrie’s house, her mother stated that
she wasn’t accepting phone calls. So far, she hadn’t let me in on
what was going on.
“She
still hasn’t talked to me about it.”
I
turned my attention back to the television and watched
half-heartedly.
The
movie had been on for a while as I considered my dilemma. I wrestled
with the idea of approaching the subject; it had the potential to
turn things weird, real quick. Brandon laughed at a scene from the
movie.
I made
a tentative beginning. “Brandon.”
He
turned to look at me. “What’s up?”
“I
kind of . . . need to talk to you.”
“So
talk.”
“How
many girls have you slept with?” Not very subtle. “You don’t
have to tell me if you don’t want to,” I added quickly.
He
studied me. “That question’s left field even for you,” he said.
I
shrugged.
“So
what’s up?” Grabbing the remote control, he lowered the volume.
“Just
curious, I guess. You’ve never really talked about it.”
“There
isn’t much to tell.”
“But
you have. . .”
“Yes.
Twice.”
I
reached for my soda trying to act casual. “Did you like it?”
“The
first time was kinda weird,” he said as if he were summoning some
far off memory. “Very vague. I don’t know . . . I was
really drunk. Barely have any recollection of it at all.”
“So
if you liked guys, why did you bother with girls?”
“I
guess because I was kind of lost. I knew I felt differently, but at
the same time, I was afraid someone would find out, so I tried to
ignore it. Basically went along with what everyone else was doing.
All anyone ever talked about was how great sex was. There was always
talk about what girls did what.” He shrugged. “My curiosity got
the better of me. I figured I was missing out on something.”
“And
. . . ”
His
lips crooked into a smile and then he laughed. “It was . . .
interesting.”
“When
was that?”
“Two
years ago.”
“Were
you nervous?”
“Considering
I had no idea what I was doing, yeah, I’d say so.” After a moment
he added, “Well, at least I tried it.”
“But
I saw a talk show that made it sound like gay men are totally turned
off by women.”
“You
watch too many of those damn talk shows. I can’t speak for
everybody, but not all gays feel that way.” Brandon studied my
eyes. “Am I going to have to drag out what’s bugging you?”
My
stomach fell and my heart rate quickened. A lump formed in my throat.
“Does
this have to do with Carrie? You know. . . I’ll help in any way I
can.”
He
might live to regret those words. “Thanks,” I managed to say.
This was it. If I was ever going to have the nerve to ask him, it had
to be now.
“Are
you feeling well?” he said suddenly.
My
voice, barely audible, struggled to get the words out; I had
officially reached panic mode. “I need to ask you a favor.”
Looking down at the couch, I picked at the fabric. “A big one.”
“All
right. What is it?”
I
couldn’t look at him, but I mustered up all the courage I had and
took a deep breath. “Would you . . . ” I stopped,
cleared my mind and tried again. My voice was barely audible. “Will
you be my first?”
Heat
rushed to my cheeks so fast that I thought I would surely pass out
during the awkward silence that followed. I felt like an ass. I
flicked a nervous glance at him. His face was utterly blank.
“I’m
sorry. I shouldn’t have mentioned it.” Why had I opened my mouth?
“Kris,
you can have any guy you want. Why me?”
“I
trust you. I don’t know . . . all these things have been
going on with Carrie . . . it’s so confusing,” I said. “Anyway,
I—I want it to be you.” There. I said it. “Will you do it?”
There
was no way to know what he was thinking because he didn’t answer me
for a while. His voice had lost all humor. “You kinda caught me off
guard.” He looked at me again. “How long have you been thinking
about this? Have you actually thought this through?”
I
ignored his first question. “I have. I’m completely sure.” I
wasn’t, but I had to do something. “If I’ve offended you . . .”
“It’s
not that.”
He sat
perched on the edge of the couch, tipped forward with his elbows
resting on his knees. He stared at his hands, brows pursed in
concern. “You’re serious.”
“Dead
serious.”
“I
can get the keys to the beach house on Monday. We’ll—”
“No.”
I swallowed hard. “It has to be now. You know Carrie and I are
leaving for dance camp next week and I want to know…well I don’t
now what I want to know but I want it to happen before then. And
tonight, no one will be home tonight.”
He
fell back into the couch, almost pale. “Tonight?”
“I
need to know before I see Carrie again.”
Brandon
opened his mouth but silence filled the air. He closed it when he
couldn’t find a thing to say.
“Kris
. . . ”
“I
understand. It was ridiculous of me to think . . . ” I
looked down, shifting my attention to my fingers. I finally made the
admission. “At the party, I tried with Eric, but—”
“What?
You really must’ve been on drugs! That’s craziness, Kris. I can’t
believe you even considered it.”
His
vehemence surprised me, and I sat there, silent.
“You’re
afraid,” I said finally.
“Terrified.”
He rubbed his hands together. “For more than one reason. If
anything went wrong, I’d hate myself for it. And won’t you regret
it not happening with someone you really like, maybe even someone you
love?”
“I
thought you didn’t believe in love.”
“We’re
talking about you.”
“I
just want to experience what most girls do. Doesn’t that make
sense?”
“Make
sense? You really don’t believe this a typical request, do you?”
“I’m
not expecting it to be perfect. I know the first time is generally a
disappointment. I read Seventeen magazine.”
His
expression was wary. Maybe he didn’t want me to decide my sexual
preference based on an experience with him.
He
rubbed his hands over his face. “We’ll see what happens,” he
said.
Review Rating: 3.5 LIGHTNING BOLTS
Review: Torn is one of those novels that makes you stop and think. it delves into the complexity of teenage lives and their trials and tribulations of the modern world. This book seems to know no bounds, and it's really going to make the reader think. And feel. The author has taken a subject and brought it out into the light, and I have to give Ms. Lehman kudos for doing such a thing. Not everyone can pull that kind of thing off well, or even dare to pull it off at all.
Krista is new in town, and has the task of finding her place in a new school. She's dubbed as ordinary, Plain Jane, but manages to find herself in the middle of the popular crowd. Maybe starting off in a new place won't be so bad after all.
Her friends are the type that find ways to explore territories that aren't for everyone. It seems each and every friend is on the fence about who they are, and what they want out of life in regards to that. One thing leads to another, and now there's no stopping the turn of events that follows.
There are some things I'm not quite sure how I felt about, but that's what makes a good novel. Even if it's something I don't agree on, or that I question, Torn made me FEEL. It gave me a reflection of my own teenage years and that no matter how awkward they were for me, that there were some facing things far more complex than I had. Krista is fourteen, but there are things she faces early on that made me raise a brow, but then again, times have changed.
The story is written in first person, which gives us an in depth glimpse of Krista's feelings. one of the problems I had was that it felt like the scenes were cut off in odd places, and sometimes there were parts that didn't move the story along. It was rather jumpy in spots.
This isn't a light read by any regard, but it's not super dark high angst, either. Yes, there is some of that in the story, but this book focuses on characters and how they deal with the situations as they come. Very interesting and thought provoking. I'm glad I had a chance to read it.
Author
Info
At age
22, author Amber Lehman began researching and writing what would
become the novel TORN. Her writing occurred during a chaotic period
of her life and she was often forced to set aside writing time to
tend to family and personal matters. It was 5 years before TORN was
completed to her satisfaction. It went through too many editing
stages to count, and the end result was quite different than what was
originally an 1100 page novel. After years of setting it aside, Amber
finally revisited it and it was trimmed down to the 404 pages you now
see. Then she waited another 9 years before she got the courage to
publish it. Although TORN is closer to what Amber calls “faction”
than fiction, TORN draws upon experiences from her life as she
observed and participated in the social dramas surrounding her
friends lives and past relationships.
A
native of southern California, Amber loves to write and illustrate
every chance she gets. She spends most of her days conversing with
her cat, Mouse. She enjoys German culture and language, and while
it’s no secret that she holds a special affinity for the LGBTQ
community, she does also look forward to writing books in many
different genres.
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